Free writeee

1. Im apprehensive about sharing my writing because i dont really know how it sounds in other peoples view so i dont want to sound stupid.
2. I fear that even though people dont say it sucks that it might still suck
3. The best thing today that could happen with my writing is that it sounds good and i could see what other people think about it.
4. The wrose thing that could happen today is that my essay could make no sence and is horrible, but hopefully not.

The cold makes me want to...

The cold makes me want to be somewhere where its a lot warmer. I like when it snows but not when its freezing outside. Also the cold makes me want to stay inside and not go to school. I would rather have summer here rather than winter most of the time. Thats pretty much all the cold makes me want to do.

Reflection

As a writer and looking over my last essay I have many strengths and weaknesses. One strength that i have is putting a lot of information into my essay. But a weakness is not being specific on what i am talking about and maybe not making sence all the way. Another weakness i have is not always using third person and going into first or second. In this essay i need to focus on all my weaknesses. Also i need to make sure i do my strengths well.

The Awakening

In this book there was much detail about the themes and topic. I liked how the author described everything so you could see it in your mind rather than just making it up as you go. The different themes in this book helped tell how the plot how it really was going to take place. I liked how the author did that and how he compounded those two things together. When i was reading this book at first it was pretty boring and had no meaning to me bust as i kept reading it get a lot better. As i got to the end i realized how the beginning helped the end make sense rather than just being there. After i was done reading it came to me how this book really had meaning and wholeness. Once you could understad the book you could really go a long way with the meaning of everything. Overall i liked this book and the precise wording of this book it showed how thigs could really work and go on.